Hmm... I liked it.
Overall, I liked it. Sometimes, I lost interest, but eventually... I picked back up in the story..
It is a little hard to understand.. perhaps the story or.. no no, the way the story is told COULD be reworked, but I'm not going to hold that against you guys until I see it all.
Representation of the main character was nice... the guy was someone I could relate with, and I enjoyed the way he was introduced.
The music was nice, original. Very nice background since sound and music where the only things that carried the story scene by scene. The sound effects? eh... eeeeeh.... I guess with what you guys had to work with, they where ok. I didn't like some parts of it, but.. then again, this is only episode 1. Now time to see what you have in store for me next!